I visit u very often..
causing choked throats n your voice softens.
No one was there to stop me from reaching ur beautiful eyes..
But wait there was more,something more than ur empty eyes.
But just what it was i could not tell..
And yet, I sensed that all was not well.
My spirit was troubled n i felt to shout..
Too long i have been captive,please let me out!.
There in the darkness I struggled to see..
Trying to grasp what was stopping me.
I told to myself that i am tough and strong..
But a voice spoke softly tat's where ur wrong.
"You tell yourself, 'I can handle it all..
'No matter what happens, I must stand tall.'
"Let go of your pride and admit that you cry..
Coz i am the witness so dont u ever shy.
Just shut your eyes tightly n let me fall down..
I'll roll down your cheeks,n make you calm n sound.
I know that no longer would I be the same,as u weep..
I'll come and go but then there will be peace.
So dont hesitate to call me again..
Coz i'll find my way even if there is no rain.
I'll come running to fill your eyes for years...
N people will say tat u have eyes full of TEARS.
Friday, April 17, 2009
TEARS-an autobiography
Posted by swati at 12:16:00 AM
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beautiful!! i luv that tiny droplet and anything writen on it :)
hwz ya grl??
i am in love with ur tears then :)....awesome write up sweety..:)..and
**I told to myself that i am tough and strong..
But a voice spoke softly tat's where ur wrong
ur are not rong ...ur strong and tough :)...
its good to read a awesome post from u sweety :)...
urs..hemu..
oh... I love em and I hate em :)
a beautiful ode to them da..
loved it...
have a nice day... cheers...
Beautifully written! Can identify with a lot of things in there...
@sawan
it's tiny but it brings out all ur pain.. :)
thanks yaar
n im fine...
good day :)
@hemu
u love tears but i hate it at times..
thanks dear..good to hear from u..
take care :)
@arv
hey thanks for those lovely words arvind..
good day :)
@dhanaya
thanks dear...its an integral part for all of us..
take care :)
Tears, i am sure it's the same that they want to say to us. getting deep under the skin of the real icon of pain requires a sensitive heart and pain in the poetess herself. Reader understand the soft sensitive side ...know what that means.
Happy blogging,madam. Many are surrendering to a touchy heart.
@mannu
thanks for ur comment..well!i am not a poetess it is something very natural to every1 i TRIED to express it in words my way..n good to know that people understand the soft sensitive side... :)
karthik's comment :Lemme get a dictioanry now to find the alternatives for mindblowing!! :)
I'm tired of using it in your blog, lovely, fantastic.. Lucky u blog rare;y elase i'll be running out of adjectives :)
@karthik
sorry buddy ur comment got deleted unknowingly..i curse my sensitive mouse for it..so sorry
it's the best comment i have ever got thanks for it...
but did u actually mean that or u were pulling my leg ?:P thank God atleast som1 justified my rare blogging..so, u dont need to pay extra bucks for the dictionary coz i'll keep ur words n blog rarely :P
and tears come out cos of some reason.. liked your reason..
:)
Beautiful!!
lovely descriptive lines.......
loved them....
hey you should try out this 55 fiction in which tears too form a kind a character....
http://average-everyday.blogspot.com/2009/04/short-stories-55-fiction.html
very well worded and writtern interesting thought
Sri
well you know,tears really have two sides of coin...!!
sometimes tears ,really creates happiness and sometimes,really makes happiness to get into pain..!!
really cool post..!!
Awesome way of presenting about something sensitive
@chriz
hey welcome dear..nt thanks fr ur comment..
@k
thanks a lot.. :)
@muthu
thanks dear..will surely try it..
@sri
thanks fr those wonderful words buddy n welcome to my blog
@prajyot
thanks dear..n i completely agree with you on this..thats y they have lotz of emotions involved
@padma
thanks babes...fr ur sweet comment..n hope to see u again...good day!!
a really really true n awesome post....
a autobiography of a tear .. nice title itself..
harry
hey dear,
its so good , wonderful write up on everyone's friend- both in sad and happy moments
that was a beautiful piece of work..
i liked the way you brought it out, as an autobiography
good job
Busy??
wow!!tht was so amazing....beautifully expressed gurl.
My this post is new to this Blog. Your all posts seem some sort of sadness. You are a gurl_alone_in_a_Room?
My this post is new to this Blog. Your all posts seem some sort of sadness. You are a gurl_alone_in_a_Room?
आपकी कविता बहुत प्यारी थी ...विचार बहुत खूबसूरत ...आप बहुत अच्छा लिखती हैं
मेरी कलम - मेरी अभिव्यक्ति
hey very well written .realy i dont know from where u guys got that type of nc thought .......realy nc :))
beautiful dear.simply loved it
i am touched :)
it's just so beautiful and touching that i have no words to appreciate it.
i wonder it's jus a co-incident or some connction...
http://mywhitewindow.blogspot.com/2007/11/auto-biography-of-unshed-tear-drop.html
go thru d link u will understnd wat m tlking @ dear shweta.
thnks for ur wishes n ur visit. m glad to find out another beautiful poet in bloggerville. :)
take care swetha.
update ur blog swati. :)
thnx for following girl. m proud too follow ur blog too and happy to hv new horizon in my blogroll. :)
take care :)
loved it darlin'.....muahhhhh
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