Friday, April 17, 2009

TEARS-an autobiography



I visit u very often..
causing choked throats n your voice softens.

No one was there to stop me from reaching ur beautiful eyes..
But wait there was more,something more than ur empty eyes.

But just what it was i could not tell..
And yet, I sensed that all was not well.

My spirit was troubled n i felt to shout..
Too long i have been captive,please let me out!.

There in the darkness I struggled to see..
Trying to grasp what was stopping me.

I told to myself that i am tough and strong..
But a voice spoke softly tat's where ur wrong.

"You tell yourself, 'I can handle it all..
'No matter what happens, I must stand tall.'

"Let go of your pride and admit that you cry..
Coz i am the witness so dont u ever shy.

Just shut your eyes tightly n let me fall down..
I'll roll down your cheeks,n make you calm n sound.

I know that no longer would I be the same,as u weep..
I'll come and go but then there will be peace.

So dont hesitate to call me again..
Coz i'll find my way even if there is no rain.

I'll come running to fill your eyes for years...
N people will say tat u have eyes full of TEARS.

39 comments:

sawan said...

beautiful!! i luv that tiny droplet and anything writen on it :)

hwz ya grl??

Hemanth Potluri said...

i am in love with ur tears then :)....awesome write up sweety..:)..and

**I told to myself that i am tough and strong..
But a voice spoke softly tat's where ur wrong


ur are not rong ...ur strong and tough :)...

its good to read a awesome post from u sweety :)...

urs..hemu..

Arv said...

oh... I love em and I hate em :)

a beautiful ode to them da..

loved it...

have a nice day... cheers...

Dhanya said...

Beautifully written! Can identify with a lot of things in there...

swati said...

@sawan
it's tiny but it brings out all ur pain.. :)
thanks yaar
n im fine...
good day :)

swati said...

@hemu
u love tears but i hate it at times..
thanks dear..good to hear from u..
take care :)

swati said...

@arv
hey thanks for those lovely words arvind..
good day :)

swati said...

@dhanaya
thanks dear...its an integral part for all of us..
take care :)

Karthik said...
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Mannu said...

Tears, i am sure it's the same that they want to say to us. getting deep under the skin of the real icon of pain requires a sensitive heart and pain in the poetess herself. Reader understand the soft sensitive side ...know what that means.
Happy blogging,madam. Many are surrendering to a touchy heart.

swati said...
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swati said...

@mannu
thanks for ur comment..well!i am not a poetess it is something very natural to every1 i TRIED to express it in words my way..n good to know that people understand the soft sensitive side... :)

swati said...
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swati said...

karthik's comment :Lemme get a dictioanry now to find the alternatives for mindblowing!! :)
I'm tired of using it in your blog, lovely, fantastic.. Lucky u blog rare;y elase i'll be running out of adjectives :)

@karthik
sorry buddy ur comment got deleted unknowingly..i curse my sensitive mouse for it..so sorry
it's the best comment i have ever got thanks for it...
but did u actually mean that or u were pulling my leg ?:P thank God atleast som1 justified my rare blogging..so, u dont need to pay extra bucks for the dictionary coz i'll keep ur words n blog rarely :P

Chriz said...

and tears come out cos of some reason.. liked your reason..

:)

k said...

Beautiful!!

muthu said...

lovely descriptive lines.......

loved them....

hey you should try out this 55 fiction in which tears too form a kind a character....


http://average-everyday.blogspot.com/2009/04/short-stories-55-fiction.html

Srivats said...

very well worded and writtern interesting thought

Sri

prajyot said...

well you know,tears really have two sides of coin...!!

sometimes tears ,really creates happiness and sometimes,really makes happiness to get into pain..!!

really cool post..!!

padmajamatlaparti said...

Awesome way of presenting about something sensitive

swati said...

@chriz
hey welcome dear..nt thanks fr ur comment..

swati said...

@k
thanks a lot.. :)

swati said...

@muthu
thanks dear..will surely try it..

swati said...

@sri
thanks fr those wonderful words buddy n welcome to my blog

swati said...

@prajyot
thanks dear..n i completely agree with you on this..thats y they have lotz of emotions involved

swati said...

@padma
thanks babes...fr ur sweet comment..n hope to see u again...good day!!

haritha said...

a really really true n awesome post....
a autobiography of a tear .. nice title itself..
harry

Suree said...

hey dear,
its so good , wonderful write up on everyone's friend- both in sad and happy moments

Amal Bose said...

that was a beautiful piece of work..
i liked the way you brought it out, as an autobiography
good job

Karthik said...

Busy??

Ria said...

wow!!tht was so amazing....beautifully expressed gurl.

thebinafterbigb said...

My this post is new to this Blog. Your all posts seem some sort of sadness. You are a gurl_alone_in_a_Room?

thebinafterbigb said...

My this post is new to this Blog. Your all posts seem some sort of sadness. You are a gurl_alone_in_a_Room?

अनिल कान्त : said...

आपकी कविता बहुत प्यारी थी ...विचार बहुत खूबसूरत ...आप बहुत अच्छा लिखती हैं

मेरी कलम - मेरी अभिव्यक्ति

shanky said...

hey very well written .realy i dont know from where u guys got that type of nc thought .......realy nc :))

Priya Joyce said...

beautiful dear.simply loved it

i am touched :)

Preetilata【ツ】 said...

it's just so beautiful and touching that i have no words to appreciate it.

i wonder it's jus a co-incident or some connction...

http://mywhitewindow.blogspot.com/2007/11/auto-biography-of-unshed-tear-drop.html

go thru d link u will understnd wat m tlking @ dear shweta.

thnks for ur wishes n ur visit. m glad to find out another beautiful poet in bloggerville. :)

take care swetha.

Preetilata【ツ】 said...

update ur blog swati. :)

thnx for following girl. m proud too follow ur blog too and happy to hv new horizon in my blogroll. :)

take care :)

deepika said...

loved it darlin'.....muahhhhh

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