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One night I heard a knock at my door
Who could it be I wasn’t so sure.
I opened the door and was filled with glee
The visitors ahead were no strangers to me.
I welcomed the guests with a fake smile
For I knew- might not I get any respite.
An air of suspicion crammed the space
My home was now a mysterious place.
Have you any clue who these visitors were?
My long lost desires- all who refused to blur
Travelled they long- from dawn to dusk
At last were here to brush off my mind laden with dust
Some desires filled me with great zest
For I knew they may soon manifest.
Some were buried deep in my heart
Since I nipped them in bud with a feeble dart.
For some desires I had, my heart still repents
Why I had them ever, I forever lament.
Some had grown in layers manifold
They cry in silence while I suffer and behold.
Died the few- their painful death
Left were only the memories and wreckage.
Some bygone desires resurfaced and floated in the heart
I smiled morbidly as I knew they soon will depart
Ready To Depart When they were,night turned into ethreal hours
I wrapped them in celstial coffin,on top of that sprinkled some flowers
Again they promised to visit my heart,when i refused to make them my integral part
In vain they pleaded on their knees,but it was time for them to rest in graveyard.
p.s. i am highly thankful to preety(tweenu) for designing this beautiful template for my blog,though it is still under construction,but i know she will modify n make it exactly as i want it to be :) Love ya tweeny :)
70 comments:
ab main kya bolu tweenu. u already knw everything.
i just adore the way u cm up with detailing.
lv ya loads.
muahhhhhhhhhhhh
hugsssssssssssssss :)
Poems ! they always catch me on the backfoot !
Nice,a li'l frail though.
the template is beautiful. :) and yes so is the poem.
U write beautifully girl.
swatu..
are you even human anymore??
loved it darling :)
hugs
nice poem swati..
urs..hemu..
This is one of the best poems I have read in a while. Could relate to it somehow...
The template is different. But a lil dark :)
gud hai yaar!!
poem bhi blog design bhi.
Love the way your template is shaping up..:) Cheers!!
This one was a revelation...! Well done...it was simply a feeling hidden in all our hearts but we cover it with a fake smile..;)
Keep writing..!
seriously girl... how can u write so sexy... really adorable...
awesome.. dont have words
SiMbA
If it will not be too much of an ask,can you suggest some template for me too ?
thanks for your visit to my blog
it is nice to find ppl with a passion for poetry...n i appreciate this poem v much
the spirit enthralled my soul... thanx
@preeti
N thanks to you for everything :)
love ya more :)
HUgsss :)
@maximus
:) thanks dear :)
Goodday!
@archana
thanks!!
Goodday!
@Ria
aww..:) thank you so much sweets :)
Goodday!
Hugss :)
@mystu
naah..:P spirit you see :)
Love ya sweetheart :)
hugss :)
@hemanth
Thank you!
Goodday!
@dhans
ohh..i am blushing dear *wink *wink :)
Thank you soo much for those kind words..:)
yes the template is a bit dark..work is going on..lets see..how it turns up to be finally
Goodday!
Hugs :)
@Vikas
*gud hai yaar!!
poem bhi blog design bhi.*
Thank you yaar!!
for reading and commenting bhi :P :P
Goodday ji!
@fiducia
Yup i so agree with you..
n thank you so much for your words dear :)
goodday!
@Simba
ehehe :P even i dont know :P
thank you so much for your comment :)
goodday!
@maximus
sure :)
@diwakar
thanks for the appreciation.
goodday!
@NJ
Thats a lovely comment..
thank you NJ!
Goodday!
nice work
been my first time to this blog
will keep this on my radar
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keep bloggin..
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Hey thats a lovely write up!! The template sure matches the mood of the poem!..now thats rejection in the end right? or am i wrong? I got that from asking them to rest in Graveyard!..cya around
HaRy
beautiful! both ur poem, and di's handmade template! :)
super! :)
I am in total awe of your style of writing yaa.. I mean, you do post not-so-often but boy! do you know how to deliver a bombshell when you do write OR WHAT?!!
My love for you multiplies with every new virtual-creation of yours :)
go sista!!!
Amazingly written. You have good creative skills and keep sharpening them. And welcome to my blog.
I knew this was coming....
I can't add your blog since I don't have the access here.
Abt the poem - very good. Tc.
Perfectly well written and occupying..
jolliieesss:-)
Nice template.. great poem!! :)
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Beautiful poem :-)
Simply beautiful!
tat ws a reely wonderful jot down..u cn call it emotional...but the sync of happiness wth sorrow..is wat i found magnificent :):)
nice poem, and so is the template..
do u like black a lot?
very nice unique style and good to have buried desires :D
@ Sorcerer
thanks fr the comment dear..
n welcome to my blog.hope u likes it!
goodday!
@HaRy
it was rejection harry..u guessed it right!
will drop at your place sometime soon.
n thanks for the comment
goodday!
@leo
thanks leo!
Goodday!
@mystu
u know what..you made me read my post again..coz u very well know that when it comes to writing then you are an epitome in it.and these words coming from you filled me with awe..i am like what should i say now..
love ya sis!!a lot!!
hugs!
@jaggu
thanks a lot for your comment..will try to do so :)
Goodday!
@indrajit
:) and i know who told you.
thanks for the appreciation.
Goodday!
@escapist
thanks a lot dear!
Goodday!
@Merlin
thanks!!
Goodday!
@Esther
checked it gurl..will try it soon :)
Goodday!
@komal
hey komal thanks a lot!
Goodday
@Jalpari
and i thank you! :)
Goodday!
@pj
thanks a lot sweetie pie :)
Hugs :)
@saurabh
ehehe :P yes saurabh i love it!
and thanks for your comment.
Goodday!
@ani_set
:) thank you!! well! yes i agree :)
wow... a good poem!! :)
u write well... and yes, the blog looks superb!!! :)
ur poems are really wonderful..
loved this one..
the words used were awesome and deep n a bit dark too i guess ;)
and the template is beautiful.. :)
btw.. sorry for being late ;)
Waiting for your next post!!
Hope your Desires manifest soon :)
Amazing Blog!
All the best!!
If I steal your template, don't put me behind bars :| But WOW @ the poem. :)
what else you can think about types of desires!!!!!!!....nicely written!
@Ankur
thanks for your visit..Good to see u here again after a long time..:)
Goodday!
@Amal
hey thats ok..its better late then never..
and thanks a lot for those words dear..:)
Goodday!
@Merlin
its up :)
@Surya
Thanks!!
Goodday!
@Anamika
You are under arrest :D
and your punishment to be regular here :)
Thanks!!
Goodday!
@Param
Thanks dear!!
Goodday!
Lovely poem..
And the template is cool!!!
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Wonderful! I can connect to this entirely. So many desires that have died a painful death. So many wishes that may never come true. So many destinations I never might seek. Every word of this poem goes deep down and touches the soul. I am sure many of us will be able to connect to these words. I guess I am going to sit and replay life in retrospective, dig all of my dreams, aspirations and see if I can do any service to them.
i think you are fascinated with the dark side!!how the desires influences the mind as well as the heart was very well used in this piece of poetry!!darkness was required and darkness was felt!!i liked the ending where you buried your desires!!ohh i thought the ending would be 'rest in peace' it was like really the word which was hitting the nail on the head!!i would like to know that why the usage of the word graveyard!!i know you would have thought of peace but then why graveyard!!well written and keep writing!!!
Good emotions. lovely thoughts :)
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