Cuddling my arms around my knees I sat on the beach of an unanamed sea Resting my chin on the joints.. Canvassing the silver night Moonlight was shining bright, Spreading a silvery light reflecting in the water, The hush n rush of the swiftly flowing silver liquid Transmuting ordianry water into mercuric metallic flow Watching waves wash up the beach and washing out again Taking away the sand beneath my feet. In the sky Moonlight romancing wid billions of stars Spreading the silver luminance Two brightly shining silver star Spreading thr silver smile Seemed to perform an angelic dance Showering happiness n blessings The clouds were broken wid silver rays Covering the moon now n then When clouds parted The beauty of the night sky was made to appear There was subdued heavy silence Some dark feelings overshadowed me Sudden gush of being drenched in dark silver flow To wipe of the fear,tears,and the past grudges To rejuvenate self,n be a new born And then thr was beautfl silver rain pouring frm sky Gazing my past, The droplets falling on the fallen petals n leaves That silver rain marked a new beginning And filled life wid acoustic silver paint I still sat drenched wid cuddled arms Watching the new horizon Witnessing the silver lining of clouds Transforming into a golden ray.It has been a year since i have been into blogging and my pace has been really slow bt i love it this way,so here's a Big heartfelt thankyou on my 25th(silver) post to all my frenz who have been really supportive throughout n to all those too who came here read the post but didnt comment THANK YOU ALL..:) :)
wonderful work swati.. beautiful and highly detailed description of the brilliant night sky.. A really silvery post for the silver jubilee.. im hoping to see ur golden post soon.. and its not the frequency of posting that matters, its the content. and with this type of awesome work ur doing, we dont care how long we wait for ur next.. take care :-)
A lovely poem to top it all off :)congrats mate... cheers...
u r slow....not a doubtand its good when u do no compromise with quality of work.lIked ur blog and poems!!!PARAMVEERmypoeticaccent.blogspot.com
that was so wonderful a post dear :)loved to be lost in it yaar :)keep going keep postinghappy blogging :)
congrats for completing a yr gurl!!and tht was an awesome post, Hope u always keep writing such awesome posts. :)
I had one of these experience of being on the shore by the moon light. and the way you expressed it is just the wat i felt it. the only difference was it wasnt a rainy night. Too good buddy slow and steady keep going, will catch soon in this journey called life.CheersNikhil
blogging is cool in this manner that it makes one his or her own boss :) so its cool...and sometimes slow posting makes it all more excitin for friends to wait for next post :)coming to this post...U have a brilliant skill of going deep into arrations with your verses and words swati!tc and god bless!keep writing! u have a gr8 talent and if practiced and brushed for another year...might take ya miles more :)wishes there with u!followin ur blog now!:)tc god bless!
lovely..congrats girl..may you have many many more wonderful blogging years..
Beautiful Post Swati :)Each and every sentence..carries a beautiful feeling with it.I could imagine the whole thing.Its just awesome :)Congrats for the Silver Jubilee post:)takecarekeep smiling :)
Transmuting ordianry water into mercuric metallic flow Watching waves wash up the beach and washing out again......Beautiful lines. and Congrats!!
WOW!!!!First of all, how in the world did you get an image that so beautifully syncs with the poem???Loved the last stanza...and especially the last line..Beautiful!It just seemed like the colour Silver held our whole life and finally made it so worthy that of gold..Colours make up our life and so it is so true!!!Blogging is all about expressing your mind in words..Slow or fast, as long as you don't think the need to blog, don't!All the best for your ventures in this domain and hoping to see more of your masterpieces!
Hiya !Too wonderful ...jolliieesss
Loved the post so much :)..love ya sweeety :)...completed one year...wow :)....congrats once again..and loads of love HUGS....the poem is simply so suberb :)...HUGS....urs..hemu..
congrats swati. nice write :) happy blogging! :)
hey sweety swati, congrats.... lovely poem....keep going ....
:-) Picturesque.Loved the description of the whole step up .....Golden ray :-) *smiles*Congrats.Keep Blogging.
Congrats on your 25th blog! Keep going. :)That was a wonderful poem :)Happy blogging.
the last two lines of the poems were very meaningful, and i guess, that's how life should be, gradually transforming into something newer and brighter.congrats on your 25th post, and we all would love to read many more from you in times to come.
Good one...keep writing.
it felt like I almost witnessed watching the new golden horizon.beautiful poemxoxo The 15Y.O Naive
Congratulations dear!Keep up the good work & the pace :)
A blogger is free to blog at whatever pace he or she wants!!! I guess your blogging at a slower pace only make your posts extra special. Something to look forward to every time...Lovely post as usual. Happy 25th! :)
Congrats!!By the way, you did you put my Girl friend post in this post?? You assured me, you wont show to public na.. She is now scolding me!! :(
aww that was lovely, i could get the drift towards the end of the poem with lots of "silver" being used :)
congratulations on completing an year in blog world...and that was a wonderful poem..
Pak Karamu reading your blog
@Amali hope so too amal :)tats so sweet of u :) but it may really take long to reach tat golden post.u too take care mate :)
@arvThanks fr those kind words da :)Take care :)
@paramveerwelcome here..n thanks fr liking my work. :)Goodday!
@riahey ria..thanks..its jus tat i have some really lovely frenz like u who always motivates me tat i cud write smthng whch even i liked :) love ya!!Take care!
@NikGlad tat u liked it buddy :)Goodday!!
@pulkitthanks fr such lovely words pulkit..n i liked ur blog too..thanks fr blogrolling :)
@mad bloggerthanks mate :)goodday!!
@prasonThanks dude :) thanks fr ur wishes :)Gooday! take care!
@satyuThank u so much gurl :)Love ya!!take care!!
@indrajitThanks a loads dear :)Goodday!
@fiduciam so glad tat u cud connect wid the post :)Yup this is hw life is full of different shades.n point noted dear..i will only write wen i feel like doing it..:)will try to match up wid the expectations :)Love ya!!Tc!
@EscapistWelcome dear :) n thanks a tonne :)Goodday!!
@hemuthanks dear..love ya!!hugsss :)tc!!
@archuthanks arch :)tc!
@SureeThanks dear :)Goodday!!
@fallen angel :-)*wink *wink :)Thank u :)Take care!!
@saranyaThanks a loads dear :)Goodday!!
@saurabhthanks so much dear..will try to improve my pace :)Take care!!Goodday!!
@jarlinThanks dear :)Goodday!!
@The 15Y.O NaiveGlad u liked it dear :)hugggggsss :)Goodday!!
@Arunimahehe..yeah dont knw bout work but yes pace i will :PLove ya!!Thanks dear :)
@dhanyasome positive aspect to my slow blogging :)love ya!!Thank u so much sweety :)Tc!!hugggggsss :)
@karthikawwee :P is she ur gf?? but she didnt uttered a word wen i askd her fr a pic..she was OK wid it :P btw whr ru..why is she all alone?? :P
@aniwelcome to my blog dear :) n thank u fr liking it :)Goodday!!
@RaneThanks a loads dear :)Goodday!!
@Pakthanks :) hope u liked it..Goodday!!
standing ovation darling. applauds.it was MAGICAL :)keep weaving such marvelous poetries my tweeny. m soooo very proud of u.congratulations....may u keep touching new heights.hugs....muahhhhhh...love u loads :)
You have a very nice blog with great discussion... I am now your follower.. Pls visit sometimes when you have time..
Finally I you made me comment. Its always a pleasure to come around your blogspace. God bless you
Swati, this is mind blowing!! such a beautiful description. i am in love with it!!congratz on ur silver post sweets and keep penning!!and once again, i am in luv with the description!
@preeti*hugssss* *kises*love u loads tweeny :Dthank u soo much!!
@chubskulithey welcome here...n i will definetly be thr..n thanks for following :)Good day!
@YesThe pleasure is all mine dear..God Bless ya too :)Good day!!
@sawanawe :) thanks fr liking it dear..so good to see u aftr soo long :)Take care!!Gooday!! :)
this is one of my fav topics too... loved the way you portrayed it!
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that was lovely!
Good1 :) cute thought
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