(Mark was on his way to home for his wedding anniversary,Kate wrote this as a gift after speaking to him the same morning)
Mark,
I may not love you,but i wana take care of you,
You are big enough to make it in your world on your own..
The man within you may think ti's wrong..
I'll show you the care of a woman that knows no bounds,
To hold u close without holding you near
It's not a sign of weakness so let me be strong,
I wanna take care of you.
I'll carry the weight of your world on my shoulder,
In the prime of our years till time ticks us older..
I want to b the reason for your smile,
I want to hold u in between my arms of life,as..
I wanna take care of you.
I'll be your rope when that mountain's too steep,
Be your hope when the water's too deep..
I'll share my blanket when trouble winds turn colder.
I wanna take care of you
I'll be your canopy,in the scorching sunlight,
Will be your smile,when things don't turn right..
I'll swathe you with words,everytime u fall short of it,
I will always take care of u.
(Kate heard the news of Mark's death(car crash),and this is what she wrote)
It's not love it's so much more,
For once in my life I don't know what I am living for..
You may not be here but each bit has your presence,
Without you this world doesn't even make sense .
When the good Lord took you why didn't he took me too,
So that i could always be there with you..
You are far away ,but one thing I know is
I still wana take care of you
No matter how hard death tries,
It cant take away our memories..
Coz in the end my care is stronger than death,
I cudn't stop your death from happenning,
So how can your death stop me from caring.
You cudn't live your life to the fullest,
But I'll make sure I live each moment twice to make up for you..
Life and death may have drawn us apart,
But I promise my care will always be there for you.
From your loving wife
Kate
*this post is a complete piece of fiction,has nothing to do with someone living or dead*
Wish you all a crackling New year!! :)
40 comments:
well u know my comment don't u tweeny.
loved it as always.
but i don't think any kind of post scripts r required.
n woowwwww what a template!!! muahhhhhhh ;)
huggy puggy.
Really amazing........
How pathetic the situation becomes....nobody can feels exact in same way the victim goes through..
amazingly wrote....
wonderful lines
:)
nice to read an update:)
That was so touching....i feel sad to read tragic love stories :(
Anyways, happy new year dear.
That was awesome, you know... :)
Regards,
Ravi.
Super!
Has the disclaimer to be believed? Happy New Year :)
Karthik youngistan
strong post to kick off the new year :)
take care mate... cheers...
You have brought out selfless love in the best manner possible. It is is unhindered, uninhibited and pure. Liked the poem(s).
Just one suggestion, you use a lot of SMS lingo in your poems. It is sort of a distraction. I like words with all the meat, they look elegant that way. But, that's me. :-)
Cheers! Do visit my space sometime you find convenient.
i agree to vittaldas. i have told u this so many times. now its high time u stop using sms lingo.
muahhhhh
huggy puggy
That was a beautiful piece of work...
and yes please send me a list of the places here in kolkata where I can join an NGO on a volunteer basis and work especially in teaching children.Thankyou very much for your reply. Since I am still completing my graduation, so I will be able to extend my help only during the evenings on weekdays and on weekends.
Have a nice day
Hey u knw dear....m FLAT 4 ths piece of work of urs, do KEEP WRITING
Take Care
This is a nice piece of writing...very touching.
sounds real too..makes it easy for the reader to believe in real life love stories.
cheers.
hello
gr8 post ....
Happy new year
Very touching, esp the last lines.
Kp writing.
its beautiful swtu. and wer did u get this pic? it compliment ur words so well!! nice choice of wrds and some how i am in love with the emotion :)
brilliantly written..especially the first part.
but the way u gave the descriptions cudve been in a better way.
but altogether a really wonderful piece of work.
keep writing :)
Poignant..!!
Vinz
Good one...keep writing.
that was really a beautiful write up...just loved the way the words flowed :)...
urs..hemu..
that was really a beautiful write up...just loved the way the words flowed :)...
urs..hemu..
Nice... but is it really fiction? Or inspired by something from the real world?
Do you remember me? :)
U r too good , swati.
Last it 'stole' away one of your poems, about little boy, and read it over and again when away on ship.
I do it again today!:-)
take care and keep writing. u r wonderful.
its really awesome.....
actully don't have words to express how nice it is..
its so touching...i actully had goose bumps!!!!
great work dear..do keep writing.
congrats n all the best
What a lovely blog!
~TyRo~
Beautifully written...
(kate writes a letter to mark 2 days after his funeral)....
i think i loved you
as much as i love steve(met at the funeral)....
i think i love you and take care of you more than anything ...
i think my love,feelings and carings for you couldnt be sperated by mere death!
infact thats more than love!
when that gets overflowed i just couldnt bear that anylonger ...
so,i redirected my love and care for you towards "steve"...
but in my perception its same you ...and....
i still "WANNA TAKE CARE Of YOU"......
no human can love ANOTHER human...
if he wants to love another,,, he must recognise that "another" as a part of himself....
liked ur poem.. nd liked ur blog too..
inviting u to my poetic world...
nd waiting for ur words !!
so touching!!!!
hey i hav a surprise waiting for u at my place link is http://tendertwines.blogspot.com/
once again you have penned a splendid thought. i am back on the block.
cheers
Nik
No new posts?
Great work .. write again
Brooke
http://momentsofelegance.com
quit writing?.. you good aren't you?
Left this space for ever or what?
time to say happy new year.. not a single post after this one ? :(
Nice! :-)
*this post is a complete piece of fiction,has nothing to do with someone living or dead*
Sorry but I have always believed that when someone writes something it comes out from heart (more than from mind)...this isn't just a fiction..this can't be just a fiction! Yes..Kate still takes care of him..God bless you.
Cheers,
Someone you knew-kidding!
verry beautifully written...love the choice of words and the meaning..
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