Thursday, June 11, 2009

Phantom of memories


 

  He comes to you when you don't want him
  He whispers he touches u like a cold zephyr
  He is not dark not light,he is not death not life..
  He is filled with love..n fantasy..
  He is full of grief..n grudges..
  His romance is unlike anyother..
  His kiss is everlasting ,soft n tender.
  You long for him,want his presence..
  You hug him,embrace him n make him sense.
  You ask him to come,to be close,to make you happy..
  You yell at him,thrash him when ur unhappy .
  You hear his whispers,somwhr dowm ur mind..
  But he sounds nothing,n his rustles disappear wid wind.
  He is not a man ,nor a beast..
  He is not a saint,nor a feast.
  Then guess who he is? guess who??
  He remains with you till eternity
  n he is no one else thn your own PHANTOM OF MEMORIES

to read the hindi version of my post in tweenies own words plz click here dhundhla aks..a beautiful composition.

62 comments:

Saurabh said...

Hey, another nice poem...!!!

Btw, i'm just curious, what inspires u to write such beautiful poems?

Ria said...

wow!!tht was so beautiful.... :) Loved it!

Preetilata【ツ】 said...

woooohoooo tweeny darls wat a poem. i loved it, i loved it.

oye tune bhi aaj blog update kiya even me too is thinking the same :)

love u. hugssssssssssss

Preetilata【ツ】 said...

tweeny remove this word verification na

Amal Bose said...

that was soo beautiful swati.. wonderful work.
kept me guessing till the end.

keep smiling n take care :)

Hemanth Potluri said...

its beautiful and expressed wonderfully :)..

Preeti and Swati tweenties heheh nice to see u both becoming good friends :)..

good job sweety :)..

urs..hemu..

swati said...

@saurabh
thanks saurabh...
inspirations are drawn from within:P
btw no inspirations yaar..jus some words woven together..:)
Good day :)

swati said...

@Ria
thank you sooo much dear..love ya!
good day!

swati said...

@Preeti
heeeyyyy tweennyy...u loved it n i love ya!!!!
huggggggssss :)
i have removed the verification :)
Good day!!:) :)

swati said...

@amal
thanks amal..he he u kept guessing wat :P??tat who "HE" is ??:P

thanks once again!!
Good day!! :)

swati said...

@hemu
thanks hemzy..:)

yeah..tweeny is a sweetheart :)

thanks a loads :)

take care!!Good day!

Priya Joyce said...

that was simply beautiful dear...

I juss got lost in it :)

tc

Dhanya said...

Wow...

:D

Arv said...

and that Phantom would never leave ur side...

lovely one :)

take care... cheers...

swati said...

@pj
oyee come out now..its over :P :)
Take care :)

swati said...

@dhanya
thanks dear :)
good day!

swati said...

@Arv
hopefully yes.
thanks da :)
Take care :)

eye-in-sty-in said...

nice.. !

Parikshith Kumar said...

Fab work. Very nice, very serene poetry.

I sometimes wonder how some people are blessed to be able to write such wonderful poetry and how, at the other end of the spectrum, are people like me for whom reciting 'Mary had a little lamb' can be such a challenge.

prajyot said...

Nice Poem..!! really liked it a lot

Adisha said...

That is just awesome !!! Beautifully done ...

cheers,
adisha

SMRITI said...

Ello Ello Ellloooo!!!

Finally here too... :) You had given me your URL but I didnt add it until then....been in and out of the blogosphere and everytime I visited my blog and saw all the updates, I felt like "Crap....get your fingers moving and update" :P

Liked this one....cute hai.... I personally disliked Phantom the comic character...par haan, Memories waala Phantom changa lagta hai....mostly sweet memories waala :)

Chalo ab tang karne aate rahenge...take care :)

Hugsssss >:D<

Brosreview said...

I like the riddle feel to this one. Nicely done!

Karthik said...

**CLAP**

**CLAP**

I've to tag you so as to keep you away from writing poems for a while... :)) I'm envy on reading such because I couldn't write an one!!


Btw, Where are sweets and My job status?? :( When you want to teach TAMIL??

Karthik said...

PS: Aren't you not changing your DP??

swati said...

@eye-in-style
thanks :)

swati said...

@parikshit
thanks a lot :)
those were sme too heavy words fr me..:)
even i cant recite maary had a little lamb :P
Good day!

swati said...

@prajyot
thanks a lot dear :)

swati said...

@adisha
good to see u here..welcome :)
n thanks dear :)
Good day!

swati said...

@smriti
finally i can see u on my blog too :)
sooo good to see u here :)
i dnt even knw P of phantom comics :P
ur most welcomed yaar..kabhi kabhi bhi aajaa..bas aa jaya kar :P
love ya!! :)

swati said...

@karthik
u cant write poems but u r a good critic na :) so keep up tat thing :P
sweets fr what re??n u didnt get the call letter ???? :P the interview date is over yaar..blame the postal services nt me..:(
Tamil so i think thr is no use in learning it nw..:P
n the DP is neva gonna change :)hehe
good day!

Vijay Kumar Sappatti said...

hi,

this is really very well written and expressed . I just cant stop my self to read it in one breath..

thanks


vijay

http://poemsofvijay.blogspot.com/

NovoneeL ChakrabortY said...

very nice poem!!!

Pretty Me!! said...

i read dhundhla aks so i can say, this was perfect version !! loved it :)

sHiNiNg sUrYa said...

hey i m truly, madly, deeply in love with your poetry :)

Karthik said...

Am extremely sorry for the mis-spell.. I've edited now!! Sorry again!!

V. Archana said...

nice one,swati! seems like written with someones memories in mind..

anyway,take care! good day!

Saranya said...

Beautiful lines :) Liked it.
Have a nice day :)

Dinesh Rohilla said...

really very nice poem i found every word here deeply meaning ful.

Fiducia said...

loved the phantom of memories...
nicely written...
all that's said is true and dark..
it is definitely some memories!!

Satyu said...

Really a very beautiful Poem

luvd it :)

takecare
keepsmiling:)

k.ø.c.h.ü said...

tic tic...markin ma first visit here..yippie...

nice read...

hmmm itz time dat u really stop 'thinkin n thinkin'..hope de HE really 'coms into Reality...no more a phantom!!

k.ø.c.h.ü said...

oops forgot: "HI"

sawan said...

luvly thoughts sweets!

Chriz said...

nice one indeed :)

prajyot said...

hey wherz u lost? nope visits so far...!! Kinda busy??

swati said...

@vijay
thanks fr those kind words :)

n welcome to my blog.
Goodday!

swati said...

@novoneel
Welcome dear..n thanks a lot fr ur comment :)
Goodday!

swati said...

@pretty me
so u came here frm tweenies blog.she is an awesome writer :)
thanks fr dropping by n thanks fr ur lovely words :)
Goodday!

swati said...

@surely
hehe..thanks dear :)
Goodday!

swati said...

@karthik
tats ok da..i was jus kidding :P

swati said...

@archu
yes archu good to see u here..:)
memories are an integral part of all of us :)
Goodday!

swati said...

@saranya
thank u so much dear :)
Goodday!

swati said...

@dinesh
thank u so much fr ur words dear :)
Goodday!

swati said...

@fiducia
thanks a lot..yes its dark bt very deep :)
Goodday!!

swati said...

@satyu
hey thank u soo much dear
u too take care :)
be happy :)
Goodday!

swati said...

@kochu
helyo welcome :)
well HE here referred to memories n to no one in particular or an individual :)
im happy wid my life :)
Take care :)
Gooday!!

swati said...

@sawan
:( soo late :( but thanks soo much dear :)
take care..
Gooday!

swati said...

@Prason/Chriz
Good to see u here too..keep pouring :) n thanks a lot fr ur comment
Take care!!
Goodday!!

swati said...

@prajyot
yes prajyot..im nt a regular bloggger :P
but will try to be mre regular..
thanks dear :)
Take Care!
Goodday!

Fallen Angel said...

Simple , yet so elegant :-)

Abhishek said...

really really beautiful.....:o)

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