He comes to you when you don't want him
He whispers he touches u like a cold zephyr
He is not dark not light,he is not death not life..
He is filled with love..n fantasy..
He is full of grief..n grudges..
His romance is unlike anyother..
His kiss is everlasting ,soft n tender.
You long for him,want his presence..
You hug him,embrace him n make him sense.
You ask him to come,to be close,to make you happy..
You yell at him,thrash him when ur unhappy .
You hear his whispers,somwhr dowm ur mind..
But he sounds nothing,n his rustles disappear wid wind.
He is not a man ,nor a beast..
He is not a saint,nor a feast.
Then guess who he is? guess who??
He remains with you till eternity
n he is no one else thn your own PHANTOM OF MEMORIES
to read the hindi version of my post in tweenies own words plz click here dhundhla aks..a beautiful composition.
62 comments:
Hey, another nice poem...!!!
Btw, i'm just curious, what inspires u to write such beautiful poems?
wow!!tht was so beautiful.... :) Loved it!
woooohoooo tweeny darls wat a poem. i loved it, i loved it.
oye tune bhi aaj blog update kiya even me too is thinking the same :)
love u. hugssssssssssss
tweeny remove this word verification na
that was soo beautiful swati.. wonderful work.
kept me guessing till the end.
keep smiling n take care :)
its beautiful and expressed wonderfully :)..
Preeti and Swati tweenties heheh nice to see u both becoming good friends :)..
good job sweety :)..
urs..hemu..
@saurabh
thanks saurabh...
inspirations are drawn from within:P
btw no inspirations yaar..jus some words woven together..:)
Good day :)
@Ria
thank you sooo much dear..love ya!
good day!
@Preeti
heeeyyyy tweennyy...u loved it n i love ya!!!!
huggggggssss :)
i have removed the verification :)
Good day!!:) :)
@amal
thanks amal..he he u kept guessing wat :P??tat who "HE" is ??:P
thanks once again!!
Good day!! :)
@hemu
thanks hemzy..:)
yeah..tweeny is a sweetheart :)
thanks a loads :)
take care!!Good day!
that was simply beautiful dear...
I juss got lost in it :)
tc
Wow...
:D
and that Phantom would never leave ur side...
lovely one :)
take care... cheers...
@pj
oyee come out now..its over :P :)
Take care :)
@dhanya
thanks dear :)
good day!
@Arv
hopefully yes.
thanks da :)
Take care :)
nice.. !
Fab work. Very nice, very serene poetry.
I sometimes wonder how some people are blessed to be able to write such wonderful poetry and how, at the other end of the spectrum, are people like me for whom reciting 'Mary had a little lamb' can be such a challenge.
Nice Poem..!! really liked it a lot
That is just awesome !!! Beautifully done ...
cheers,
adisha
Ello Ello Ellloooo!!!
Finally here too... :) You had given me your URL but I didnt add it until then....been in and out of the blogosphere and everytime I visited my blog and saw all the updates, I felt like "Crap....get your fingers moving and update" :P
Liked this one....cute hai.... I personally disliked Phantom the comic character...par haan, Memories waala Phantom changa lagta hai....mostly sweet memories waala :)
Chalo ab tang karne aate rahenge...take care :)
Hugsssss >:D<
I like the riddle feel to this one. Nicely done!
**CLAP**
**CLAP**
I've to tag you so as to keep you away from writing poems for a while... :)) I'm envy on reading such because I couldn't write an one!!
Btw, Where are sweets and My job status?? :( When you want to teach TAMIL??
PS: Aren't you not changing your DP??
@eye-in-style
thanks :)
@parikshit
thanks a lot :)
those were sme too heavy words fr me..:)
even i cant recite maary had a little lamb :P
Good day!
@prajyot
thanks a lot dear :)
@adisha
good to see u here..welcome :)
n thanks dear :)
Good day!
@smriti
finally i can see u on my blog too :)
sooo good to see u here :)
i dnt even knw P of phantom comics :P
ur most welcomed yaar..kabhi kabhi bhi aajaa..bas aa jaya kar :P
love ya!! :)
@karthik
u cant write poems but u r a good critic na :) so keep up tat thing :P
sweets fr what re??n u didnt get the call letter ???? :P the interview date is over yaar..blame the postal services nt me..:(
Tamil so i think thr is no use in learning it nw..:P
n the DP is neva gonna change :)hehe
good day!
hi,
this is really very well written and expressed . I just cant stop my self to read it in one breath..
thanks
vijay
http://poemsofvijay.blogspot.com/
very nice poem!!!
i read dhundhla aks so i can say, this was perfect version !! loved it :)
hey i m truly, madly, deeply in love with your poetry :)
Am extremely sorry for the mis-spell.. I've edited now!! Sorry again!!
nice one,swati! seems like written with someones memories in mind..
anyway,take care! good day!
Beautiful lines :) Liked it.
Have a nice day :)
really very nice poem i found every word here deeply meaning ful.
loved the phantom of memories...
nicely written...
all that's said is true and dark..
it is definitely some memories!!
Really a very beautiful Poem
luvd it :)
takecare
keepsmiling:)
tic tic...markin ma first visit here..yippie...
nice read...
hmmm itz time dat u really stop 'thinkin n thinkin'..hope de HE really 'coms into Reality...no more a phantom!!
oops forgot: "HI"
luvly thoughts sweets!
nice one indeed :)
hey wherz u lost? nope visits so far...!! Kinda busy??
@vijay
thanks fr those kind words :)
n welcome to my blog.
Goodday!
@novoneel
Welcome dear..n thanks a lot fr ur comment :)
Goodday!
@pretty me
so u came here frm tweenies blog.she is an awesome writer :)
thanks fr dropping by n thanks fr ur lovely words :)
Goodday!
@surely
hehe..thanks dear :)
Goodday!
@karthik
tats ok da..i was jus kidding :P
@archu
yes archu good to see u here..:)
memories are an integral part of all of us :)
Goodday!
@saranya
thank u so much dear :)
Goodday!
@dinesh
thank u so much fr ur words dear :)
Goodday!
@fiducia
thanks a lot..yes its dark bt very deep :)
Goodday!!
@satyu
hey thank u soo much dear
u too take care :)
be happy :)
Goodday!
@kochu
helyo welcome :)
well HE here referred to memories n to no one in particular or an individual :)
im happy wid my life :)
Take care :)
Gooday!!
@sawan
:( soo late :( but thanks soo much dear :)
take care..
Gooday!
@Prason/Chriz
Good to see u here too..keep pouring :) n thanks a lot fr ur comment
Take care!!
Goodday!!
@prajyot
yes prajyot..im nt a regular bloggger :P
but will try to be mre regular..
thanks dear :)
Take Care!
Goodday!
Simple , yet so elegant :-)
really really beautiful.....:o)
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